Really cool. I love the weirdness of the witches and how “other” witchcraft seems here. Keeps it interesting. The maggot analogies were really visceral and easy to feel too. Love these thank you. I think this is the perfect length also.
Oh wow this is really good! I hated Steeleye for running and leaving his friends but now he’s become very interesting. Can’t wait for the next chapter! Sounds like he might have a cool backstory.
Really cool. I love the weirdness of the witches and how “other” witchcraft seems here. Keeps it interesting. The maggot analogies were really visceral and easy to feel too. Love these thank you. I think this is the perfect length also.
That "haunted/flesh" oracle found its way into this pretty heavy. Words I would have never put together.
This one came in at around 1.6k words after I edited it with a machete.
That witch scene was so good. Really interested to see what happens next. Great storytelling
Thanks! She's got a bit of bug problem.
Phenomenal story telling 👏 I find myself holding my breath to see how each story beat and chapter ends
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it.
This one in particular had the dice going wild. A lot of things I never saw coming.
Oh wow this is really good! I hated Steeleye for running and leaving his friends but now he’s become very interesting. Can’t wait for the next chapter! Sounds like he might have a cool backstory.
I did too. I think I still do, but he's showing a human side I can't help but chase after.
Your description of the witch was really good too! I really saw her in my cluttered mind.