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the black veil's avatar

Crazy good writing. Would love to see a bit more behind the curtain into what’s happening when based on rolls - maybe in the later chapters?

Thanks for sharing this!

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Odinson's avatar

Thanks!

I added notes in the subsequent chapters.

I'm still experimenting with this writing genre and learning the limits for substack and what folks like in this space.

Definitely including them going forward. I think chapter 5 is the style I'll stick with going forward.

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PJ Meacham's avatar

Great writing and illustration has me jealous! Excellent. I'm excited to read through more of your solo play!

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Odinson's avatar

Thanks so much — glad you like it!

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Oathbound Soliloquy: Ironsworn's avatar

Not familiar with Cairn but man, sounds like I have to check it out, the storytelling was excellent (and probably gets better when I get to peek behind the curtain of the rolls in later chapters, based on the comments).

You’re so talented at drawing, too. Wish I had the time to practice that art, but alas, I have to get by with stick figures 🤷‍♂️

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Odinson's avatar

Thanks so much!

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