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Crazy good writing. Would love to see a bit more behind the curtain into what’s happening when based on rolls - maybe in the later chapters?

Thanks for sharing this!

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Thanks!

I added notes in the subsequent chapters.

I'm still experimenting with this writing genre and learning the limits for substack and what folks like in this space.

Definitely including them going forward. I think chapter 5 is the style I'll stick with going forward.

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Wow! Awesome stuff.

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Thanks so much!

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That was an excellently written story. Can't wait to read more. Unfortunate sods. Lol. Thanks for sharing!

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